She says one thing
You say another
It's a never ending cycle
That winds a web of confusion
You turn your back
She turns it too
Both of you stand forward
Before you 2 break down
United we stand
Divided we fall
Together we're strong
Alone we are gone
Come eye to eye
Stand on the same ground
Speak face to face
Be on the same page
And discuss the terms
7 comments:
I really like it. I like the way you write, it's very interesting, I mean the way you are able to make it sound, it has a ring to it and that makes the poems sound really good.
I love the third verse.
"United we stand
Divided we fall
Together we're strong
Alone we are gone"
Love it.
I really,really like this poem. Good Job Liz!
love it Liz!!
nice liz
I really like it. And you know what I think about the meaning of this poem.
Thanks everybody for the reviews. I would love to see some of all of your guy's poetry.
Good Job Liz,
Its neat how you talked about how they were fighting, and then they decide to go into separate ways, and its great because your right, when someone turns their back on you, your most likely to do it back to them, and like becca said, i liked that part too. It was very neat and well said. This is great advice for anyone because At the end of this page it says come eye to eye that to the end says how its important to get past the fight because its not good to stay mad at anyone, and if you don't want to remain friends you should still be freinds because Its really important, I've been mad at soemone for over a year, and we just finally talked about it, but now i don't have this hatred toward him anymore. Good job
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