I'm captured like a jail bird
Soon to break free
When I do
I'm out of here
Emotionally free
I'm out, I'm free
Hooray for me
This jail bird is flying free
What I thought was freedom
It is now my cage
The feeling of love
Is trapping me
Shall I go back to my cell
And be encaged once more
The last happy tale
Got a Horror ending
But still isn't through
8 comments:
That is really good Liz. I think you are starting to find out what you like to write about. And I think it suits you very well.
Wow Liz that was great. k
Keep it up.
Angelas right this type of Poetry works for you.
I really like it. THe writing is great, the message is really great and just the way it's written it great.
It's great!!!
Thankyou alot. I think this is one of my best poems so far.
Great job writing this poem. Its has great meaning, and I bet everyone feels like they are trapped in a bird cage. I really loved how you rymed in this too. Overall this was a great poem. Good job.
Thankyou. I really incourage more people to post their poems more often. I really like reading other people's work too. Not just my own.
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