Friday, April 18, 2008

The mess I made

I go outside and I
See what a beautiful
Day it is



Hoping it will make
Me better



But it doesn’t take
The pain away



I can’t forget
My problems

Or the problems
I caused



My head is saying
Forgive and forget



My mouth can’t speak
My heart keeps hurting



I can’t fix it even
On a beautiful day

5 comments:

PigBatty (TNW) said...

Liz that was really good. I read it and I felt something that might have ben how you were feeling when you wrote this poem. Keep it up.

Poet Gal (Liz) said...
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AA-Chan(AC) said...

Tara thats Becca's. Also good poem Becca.

AA-Chan(AC) said...
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(akw)Stretch said...

Tara you might want to go back and see who posted this poem.

Becca this is really good.