Well I was trying to pick a good poem that I wrote recently that I liked. Well I clicked on this one and figured it was good. Until I read it. Then I thought man I was pretty mad when I wrote this one. Then I opened "I love you" I noticed I wrote it the same day. So I decided to put both on here. Because even days are hard things do get better.
I hate what you wear
I hate your hair
I hate what you say
I hate what you do
I HATE YOU
You are always on the other side
You’re never on my side
So that is why I hate you
I hate your smile
I hate your presents
For I hate everything about you
You make up lies
Like I’m controlling you
But I’m the one
Who has been asking you
I never made you do anything
You choice to be with me
I hate you
For that is all I can say
I can’t trust you anymore
I HATE YOU
Angela K. Woodman
11/28/07
I love your smile
For it brings joy to me
When I’m mad you are always there
I love to talk to you
Cause I can tell you anything
I LOVE YOU
You’re the one I love
I love your hair
I love your presents
I love your remarks
Even if there really dumb
But that’s why I love you
Your touch is all that I want
For with you I’m alive
I love you is all I can say
Cause that is what I believe
I LOVE YOU
Angela K. Woodman
11/28/07
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2 comments:
I like these peoms. For some odd reason I like the Hate poem better. Not sure why yet. But I think you did a really good job on your writing.
Keep Up The Good Work!!!!
hey angela first poem i thinks ok and the second totally different person but good poem
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